One of my favorites-Two out of three ain’t bad
Two out of three ain’t bad.
A Poem by Coyote Poetry
Lonely are the people who wasted love and friendship.
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Two out of three ain’t bad.
I was sitting alone in a Monterey tavern in 1996.
Drinking long Island ice teas.
Trying to get blinded.
A old man dressed poorly ordered a water.
Bartender gave him a bad look and walked away.
I told the bartender.
He drank the Long Island ice tea quickly.
I ordered him another.
He thanks me.
Asked me. “Was I alright?”
I told him.
“Not too good.
But I will be fine.”
He touched my back.
Told me.
“You got two out of three.
Better then most of us.”
He looked outside to the cold rainy night.
Told me.
“All three are hard to hold on to.
You got the booze. Number one.
You still got the road. Number two.
You still got a lot of living left.”
“The third one ain’t so easy.
Love cost a lot.”
I bought another round.
He raised the Long Island.
Make a cheer to life.
“To the road.
To better days.
To good booze and wine.
To sweet woman lost on the road.”
He smiled and told me “I was successful once.
I had the big house.
The beautiful wife waiting for me.”
“I choose the booze.
I loved the road too much.
Now I sitting with you.
Alone and wishing I held on tighter.”
I looked into his sad eyes.
Asked him. “What was really important?”
He smiled.
Told me to order him a double shot of whiskey.
I ordered the whiskey.
He drank in down quickly.
He whispers “Hold on, tightly and be thankful.
If you find the sweet woman.
Who loved you.
Hold on.
Nothing as sad as a old man dying alone.”
I left him.
Gave him a few dollars.
Thanks him for the advice.
I learn two out of three isn’t so good.
Need someone to love and care for you.
Before it is too late.
Coyote
3 July 1996
Meat Loaf wrote a song with this title
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Yes he did. He said different words. He said. “I want you and I need you. I will never love you.” His song about the sadness of a broken heart. Broken life is my words. Booze and bars. No peace for a good life.
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I think the combination of the music and the lyrics really makes his song work especially the rise and crescendo… There seems to be a resemblance in atmosphere to your words even if the theme is different and the atmosphere of your wording a bit more destructive
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I believe Meatloaf was talking of wild and young love. He could sing. He was one of my favorite of youth. Life is decisions. I do believe love changes with age. Old men sing of beautiful ladies missed. Young men dream of wild and perfect love. Rarely known and touched. I do use music for my poetry. Leonard Cohen, Johnnie cash and P.J Harvey are my muses. Good song make the mind work.
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Old man and memories there are a lot of songs about that as well… but true indeed good songs make the mind work
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Wow makes me think a lot. Thanks for passing on these words of wisdom. Have a beautiful day John!
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Thank you Yadei. Bar and tavern lessons are useful if we listen
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A short story in a form of poem. Brave, John
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Thank you my friend. I appreciate the comment.
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Feel like I just read a short story. Very satisfying.
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Thank you. I appreciate the comment.
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