Poetry
Attempt at short poetry.
A Poem by Coyote Poetry
Just words
I like to try new options. This is one. Less epic tales and create meaning using minimum words.
Rage and pain.
Illusion and deceit.
Love born than died.
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Slender shoulders kissed.
The nakedly dance,
the midnight hour splendor
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Captured,
unrestrained,
taunts and torment.
Imperfection enshrined.
John Castellenas/Coyote
I like the second one the most. 🙂
And yeah, constricting your words conveys more meaning sometimes or perhaps give your readers more space for interpretation! 🙂
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I agree. I wrote mainly epic poetry. Good to test the mind. Thank you Srishti for reading and the comment.
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Jussayin, your writing is pure. I love it. /fist bump
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Thank you. I appreciate the kind words.
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I like them, especially the last one. Good writing!
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Thank you Niklas. I appreciate the comment.
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