“The dance”
The dance
A Poem by Coyote Poetry
Just words and photo
The dance
In the twilight of the day.
We can dance to Lana Del Rey.
You told me. Time to forget the day and welcome the night.
I watched you and you stole my eyes and thoughts dancing
in your cotton dress. I told you. All I can see is you.
Coyote/John Castellenas
© 2015 Coyote Poetry
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Good photo create good poetry.
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The punctuation was perfectly placed, it provided this piece with such oomph. I have a question about the second line, “You can dancing to Lana Del Rey”. I found it unclear and a bit confusing. What am I missing here?
The picture is beautiful and the accompanying poem matches it move for move in it’s dance. -Carrie. Posted 1 Year Ago |
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The punctuation was perfectly placed, it provided this piece with such oomph. I have a question about the second line, “You can dancing to Lana Del Rey”. I found it unclear and a bit confusing. What am I missing here?
The picture is beautiful and the accompanying poem matches it move for move in it’s dance. -Carrie. Posted 1 Year Ago |
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Beautiful poem.
Thank you for sharing such a lovely Thank you for stopping by my page. god bless. Benita Posted 1 Year Ago |
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Oh yes, the photo was a wonderful inspiration for your poem………..such lovely words as your eyes and mind are mesmerized by the image of the dancing girl! You were caught!
Posted 1 Year Ago |
I ❤ Lana Del Rey 😀
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Me too. Lana is amazing.
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