When a woman smiled.
When an woman smiled.
My heart stopped and my world become perfect.
When your gift of your beautiful smile and laughter,
take me to sacred and cherish place.
I’m captive by your gentle green eyes and the melody of your voice.
Your smile is my opium and in your embrace. My Poet utopia.
John Castellenas/Coyote
Here teacher: When a woman smiles, my heart stops and my world becomes perfect. Your gift of smile and laughter take me to a sacred and cherished place. I’m held captive by your gentle eyes and the melody of your voice. Your smile is my opium and your embrace is my utopia.
This is what you get from copying we know who. While in your other pieces, your sentences are correct because you are using your favorite author’s work as template when you are writing freely you choke.
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